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Hello!
Îţi voi rescrie textul corect, iar la final îţi voi preciza ce modificări am adus. Mai uşor de urmărit ar fi fost dacă ataşai exact imaginea cu acest exerciţiu, pentru a putea bifa rândul corect.
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A Trip to the Funfair
We had been planning for a long time to go to the funfair for my brother's birthday, so on the big day we all piled up into the car and set off. The traffic was so bad that day that it took us nearly two hours to get there. Then we discovered that half the people in town had had the same idea. The place was so packed that you could hardly move. My brother wanted to go on the roller coaster, so we joined the queue - which seemed to be about a mile long - and waited for our turn. By the time we got to the front of the queue, my sister was complaining that she was afraid to go on the ride, and even my brother looked a bit apprehensive. Just then a man announced that there was a technical problem and the ride was closed. With a sigh of relief we went to get something to eat, had a go on the bumper cars, played a few games - my brother won a huge teddy bear - and then we went home.
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